Advice re: Writing Ⅳ

First, we had to write blog in English  many times while sophomore. We write 10,000 words in spring term, but we have to write 15,000 words in fall term. So I became very busy in fall than spring.

We can write what anything contact, daily life, favorite sports, hobbies and so on.
Mr. Beaufait instructed our to do homework. It is book reviews, movie reviews, essay and typing homework.

We had to write 18 book reviews at the minimum in fall term. So I often had to went to the library in KGU and borrow books in English. I didn’t read books in English so it was difficult to read it. So I think good you often go the library to read books in English while next this spring vacation.

To write 15,000 words isn’t easily. It is very busy every day. So I think you should plan to write blog. We could write from summer vacation. But I had never write once. I think I should write more. So you should write your memories for summer vacation!

Mr. Beaufait send our to G-mail. It was written about homework, deadline and so on. It is very important. You can’t know these if you check G-mail. So you should open G-mail and you check whether or not he send mail every day.

We had to write many words in essays. We wrote 1,000 words in movie reviews. I was so hard, but we could write in my blog so we could increase words. So you should write essay hard!

Also, you can spend easily the latter part of term if you finish typing homework. I think good you finish writing when you have free time.

You will be very hard to you get credit in Writing 4 class. But you can get it if you can do in earnest.

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My favorite Idol!

   

   Good afternoon, everyone. I am taking Writing class now. It is final writing class today. I wrote this blog all the year around. I was very busy every day but I could enjoy writing blog, too. I may write this final a contribution to the blog. 

   I will write about my favorite idol. Do you know Sayaka Yamamoto? She is a member of NMB 48 and leader. Also, she is center of NMB 48. They usually do activity in Osaka. So I don’t watch there on TV too. But their often broadcast music shows, music station, HEY HEY HEY and so on. Especially, I could watch NMB 48 on TV. Because many music shows broadcast on TV for end of the year. So I was very happy♡ She is 19 years age. She had block long hair before. This is picture of her then.

    But she cut hair and she is short hair now. I think she is very cute! She is very good at sing and dance. She is so cool. I couldn’t think she is younger than I am by one year. Many people were loved for her.

   Songs of NMB 48 are very good. I can become happy when I feel sad. Their songs are many cheerful.

   I want you to listening their music once time! I recommend you.

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My sister

    Hi, I will write about my sister, Yasuka. She is 18 years age so she goes to high school. She often read books and music in English because she likes studying English. First, I was very surprised. Because I had never seen her that studying when she was junior high school student. But I respect for her now. I thank I have to study English very hard when I see her.

   Also, she has many hobbies, cooking, drawing pictures, watching animation and so on. I like a cheesecake that she cooks. All of my family like, too. But she can’t cook only cheesecake. She doesn’t well singing. I can’t sing well, too. But we go Karaoke to practice sometimes. 

   She will go college in Tokyo April. So she leaves Kumamoto. I’m sad. But I want to do her best.

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Spring Vacation Plan

  Hi, I’m looking forward to come spring vacation because I have many plans. I will write about the plan.

  

 First, I will go travel in Kyoto with my friends, Momoe, Yuko and Yukina. We were same high school and class for three years. I go there for a long separation so I’m looking forward to go!!

    Next, I will take part in Kumamoto castle marathon in February 17. I have to run 42.195 km. I have never run long-distance. So I worry a little whether or not I can finish running. I have to practice with running very hard.

    Last, I want to watch many movies for spring vacation. Watching the movie is one of my hobbies. I often went to video rental shop “TSUTAYA” near my house, I borrowed from DVD that I want to watch before. But I can’t go there and borrow recently. Because I have many homework but also I will take final tests! I have to study hard every day so I’m very busy. I have 7 tests this time. I will finish all tests in February 5. So my spring vacation began February 6. I’m looking forward to come spring vacation!

    I don’t work part-job tomorrow, so I will study very hard.

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Crepe

   Hi, I will write about January 9. Today is Thursday, so I had only 1 class!

I went shopping in Kurea department store with my friend, Shiho after finish class.

She was same high school and class, too. We are good friends.

   
   We wanted to buy clothes. So we walked around many clothes shop. We could buy good clothes through it! And we ate crepe in 31 ice cream shop. It is very good! Crepe is my favorite sweets. It made me happy, so I was happy when I ate it.
   
   I spend enjoying this day, I 'm looking forward to see Shiho next day.

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My holiday

   Good afternoon, everyone. I always ought to take speaking class 4period every Monday.

Today is Tuesday but it became Monday schedule only today. I don’t like Monday schedule because I have to take 4 classes. But today speaking class finishes early. So I will write about my holiday last week.

   I went to Karaoke with my mother and father in the morning last Saturday. I went there for a long separation because I don’t well at sing songs. We went to Shidax near my house by car. My mother and father’s birthday is January 22. That is say, today is! So we could get birthday cake for Shidax. You get a cake in your birthday month if you are a member of Sidax.

It is chocolate cake. We love chocolate the best of all cakes. So we are very happy and eat with good.

   My mother sang many songs in English because she likes studying English. Other, my father sang song Tsuyoshi Nagabuchi. He likes him the best of singer. So he is a fan of him for many years. But I don’t know about him.

   I worked part-time job in yakiniku restaurant evening. Many people came to eat yakiniku here, too. So we were very busy! I’m going to go eating yakinku after finish final test.

   I could spend enjoying this day! See you.

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BR 2-18: Little Red Riding Hood

 "To eat you, little one!"  (p.11)

   I read a book about fairy story. Do you know Akazukin? I think many people say “Yes.” Because it is famous to fairy story all over the world. This book is English version of Akazukin. I had read a picture book in the cradle, so I know story substantially.

    But I think English version scarier than Japanese. Because it picture is like real. Especially, wolf is. If some children read this book and watch a picture, I think they cry.

    I felt punch when I read this book. I want you to read this book once. You can feel good old if you read it. But also, you may surprise a little.

 

Reference

Mcilvain, Audrey(1996).Little Red Riding Hood. England: Penguin

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Good Day

   Good afternoon, I will write about January 12. I visited to a shrine on New Year’s Day with Yuko. She went same high school, and we were same class when we were freshman. She lives in Fukuoka now. So I met her after a long separation. We went to Kengun shrine. We draw a fortune slip after pay homage. My fortune slip was very good luck! I was so happy♡

    We went town to go travel agency after. Because we will travel to Kyoto in this spring vacation with my friends, Yukina and Momoe. They were high school friends, too. I had been there once as school excursion. I’m looking forward to travel very much!

    I had alumni meeting for junior high school in hotel named Marry Gold at 5:00 pm. I could meet many friends. I was very happy. I want to see their someday. See you!

 

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United KIngdom Circumstance 5

   Today, I learned about Wales’s history in the class. I didn’t know Wales but I could know it today.

   We have to read long sentence about Wales in English through it is summarized. There were words that I don’t know in this sentence. So I could understand these to consult a dictionary. I want to remember many words. I have to study English more.

   I have to write report next Friday! I think I want to be not forgetting presenting report. So I will write it early!!

 

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Coming of Age Day Ceremony

   January 14 was coming of age day. I will write about that day. I had to wake up at 5:00 am because I went to beauty salon to set hair style at 6:00 am. My mother took me by car. I wore kimono after set hair style. My kimono is red color. It is my favorite color. I met my friend, Naho in front of prefectural office after preparation. She and I were same junior high school, but also we are part-time job members now.

   Ceremony was hold in a civic gymnasium. There is near Kumamoto syogyo high school. It was high school that I went for three years. So I feel good old.

   We went there, we met many friends. Some friends met me again since junior high school. I was very happy and I took many pictures.

   We went to MacDonald along east Bypass Street. Because people come of age in this year could get a big mac free. We went to the restaurant after we finished having it. Because we working part-time there. We took pictures with chief and my part-time members. I like their very much!

   I could spend good day. I want to see everyone someday. See you.

 

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My Birthday

Hi, I will write about January 11 in this year. This day was my birthday, I became 20 years age. Many my friends said me, “Happy birthday”. So I was very happy. I ate many cakes, chocolate, white cream and so on.

 

 

 Please look this picture. My friend, Kasumi gave me to this present! I was so happy when I got for her. I have many memories with her. All of these are my treasure. I want to make memories from now on.

I have many good friends, I’m happiness. See you!

 

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Happy New Year

   Hello, everyone and happy new year. It became 2013 year. I began to school last week. How did you spend your winter vacation? Did you enjoy? I enjoyed spending very much. But I had to work as part-time job while the end of the year and new year. My part-time job is broiled meat restaurant. It is called yakiniku in Japan. So many people come there to eat yakiniku in vacation. I made a push to getting ahead job with my part-time job member. Many people were having yakiniku with relish. I love yakiniku, too. It is one of my favorite foods.

    I had never eaten yakiniku over winter vacation. But I ate shabu-shabu in MK with my friends, Kurumi, Chihiro, and Megumi. We went to MK near Hikari-no-mori. My friend, Kasumi works there. So we wanted to go there! I saw Chihiro after a long separation. Because she went to Canada for three months. She returned Japan in December 27. So, this day we had “Welcome back Party”!

   She was talked our memories in Canada. We enjoyed listening. I was very happy because she could enjoy spending for three months. I want to go Canada someday. And we enjoyed having shabu-shabu. We can eat as much as we like for 1,500 yen at the MK. I was happy because I could watch Kasumi was working.

   Finally, I will write about my aim in 2012. I have three aims.

1.      I finish running in the Kumamoto castle full marathon.

2.      I pass some qualifications.

3.      I enjoy spending in this year.

   I wish I achieve these aims! See you.

 

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Writing Ⅳ(this sem)

 I will write about writing class in fall semester. I had to continue writing blog. But I was very surprised because we had to write 15,000 words in this semester. It was increase 5,000 words. And I had to 18 book reviews, typing homework every week.

I didn’t write blog once in August. I spend enjoy summer vacation. I thank I had to write more then.

This semester, we wrote essays, too. This is about movie review, my favorite place, and my language histories. I liked writing essay. Because I could know about I don't know. For example, I could know about Brad Pitt. I didn’t know about him until I wrote movie reviews.

I don’t finish writing 15,000 words now. I have to write about 2,000 words until this month. I ‘m very hard this week!

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Writing Ⅲ (last sem)

  I will write about writing class in spring semester. I think I stayed to write blog in English because we had to write 10,000 words in blog for 6 months.

  I didn’t usually write blog and so on until I was freshman. I didn’t like writing sentence. That say is it is weak point. First, I worried to finish writing 10,000 words in blog.

  I didn’t write blog in February and March. These months were spring vacation. So I had many time for writing blog. But I enjoyed spending every day. I thank I had to write. I wrote 418 words in February and 1,444 words in March.

  I wrote blog the best in May. I wrote 3,818 words. Because we had holiday called golden weeks. I wrote many words then. I wrote about my memories in spring vacation. I could spending enjoy very much, so I had writing my memories. Also, I wrote ten book reviews. I didn’t read book before I became sophomore, so I didn’t go the library in KGU.

  I usually wrote about diary, typing homework, book review and so on. I finished writing 10,000 words in July. I was very happy then. I could felt a sense of a achievement.

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